How did the content change?How does it improve?
I elaborated more on the Powerpoint part of my paper. This helps the audience get a better picture of what the Powerpoint will look like.
How did the form change?
I had to rearrange certain parts so that it flowed better. Now I have a more visually inducing section of my paper
Author Response
Selection from Rough Cut
PowerPoints are meant to inform people on what a researcher has done. They are usually composed of slides with few words. They also usually use graphs and charts to make it easier for people to understand.
Re-edited Section
“PowerPoint conference
presentations can have two main purposes, either to inform people about what is
new or exciting in the field or to inform people about some research they have
done” (Riggs). Both presentations still have a similar makeup. Usually the
first slides are to introduce the speaker and build their credibility. The
following slides are used to discuss whatever the presentation is about and the
last slides are a conclusion and reference slides. The slides themselves
contain about 3-4 bullet points with each bullet point only containing a few
words. The bullet points are mainly used to help the presenter remember where
he is in the presentation and for the audience to get the main points of the
presentation across. “They try to use the least amount of words possible so
that the audience is not just reading the presentation straight from the slide”
(Wright). Also, the use of graphs and charts is extremely common as a way
to better present the data collected.
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