Audience Questions
What changed about you content? How is it better?
I did not change my content at all. It is the same as before.
What changed about your form? How is it better?
One of the suggestions I got from my peers was to highlight certain important words and sentences. This helps the reader learn what he is supposed to learn and draws his eyes to important information.
Rough Cut
The
primary goal of almost every business is to maximize its profits; and reducing
the amount of money it spends is arguably the best way a business can maximize
profit. This is one of the primary reason why businesses are now outsourcing
some of their jobs. Simply put, its cheaper to outsource something than to have it done domestically and when you
are trying to maximize profits, the cheaper option is usually the best.
Re-edited Version
The
primary goal of almost every business is to maximize its profits; and reducing
the amount of money it spends is arguably the best way a business can maximize
profit. This is one of the primary reason why businesses are now outsourcing
some of their jobs. Simply put, its cheaper to outsource something than to have it done domestically and when you
are trying to maximize profits, the cheaper option is usually the best.
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