I reviewed Sienna Wills rough draft of her standard college essay here
I made a form suggestion. I suggested that she research the genre conventions of an essay and to make sure it is in the correct format (MLA or APA). Form is a huge part of the grade and losing points for not having it in the correct format would be silly. One thing I really liked was her introduction. It made it easier to connect with the barbie controversy something that does not really interest me.
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