I peer reviewed Jake Gyles open post here
I made a content suggestion. I suggested that he expand on the income counterargument. He briefly mentions it but does not really refute it. Especially since this is right before is conclusion, I think it is important that this counterargument be clearly refuted. Otherwise, I admired how complete is essay was. It did not look like he had a lot of work left to be done and should be ready to submit it.
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