I peer reviewed Alexis Morgan's open post here
I made a content suggestion. You can tell she has a very strong opinion on her issue because it is an issue for women and gender eqaulity today. However I think her opinions are voiced to strongly and she did not really expand on counter arguments. I suggested that she find more sources that disagree with her (which is really hard because I tried too). I liked how you could feel her passion when you read it. Having emotion for your topic translates to emotion in the paper which makes it a better paper. This is something I have always struggled with.
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