I peer reviewed Avalon Lubera's standard college essay here
I made a content suggestion. Like my other peer review, her essay did not really need much work. The one thing I suggested is to add more sources to make her more credible. Find sources supporting decriminalization should be very easy but will improve her essay a lot. Right now she takes a good stance and I believe her points but a they are mostly un-cited. So adding these citations would make her essay much stronger.
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